It looks like two guys lashing out with their eyes closed. One is bound to win. I couldn't help imagining moving in, head down, beating those ribs in.

lol right ......boxing is more orginized and has more of a structer to it in the chaous .... disapline disapline disapline ...that is what makes a good fighter

i guessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss u did okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk u need some work but some good news is you did better than your friend at least.lol

just a few things to point out. it looks like you have horrible balance. keep your feet closer together and shuffle your feet like the video on this site tells you too. also your stance is a little weird, im also orthodox but your jab hand looks turned around palm out. your palm should be facing you and your elbows should be tucked into your body, chin down. it looks like youre throwing too many hooks and just swinging wildly and it needs to be mroe controlled with some more jabs. hope some of this advice helped

Ok this is not telling you your rubbish, this is what they call in my school 'constructive critsism' wel you were just swinging wildly with your gaurd down. your guard should be up on your chin or cheek and you have to focus. imagin swing wildly like that with your footwork like that and your balence like that in a CHAMPIONSHIP BOUT FOR 12 ROUNDS ok im no ali but evan he would be puffed out. so try not to go to wild keep it calm with some simple jabs, combos, 1-2s and countering.

you need to work on being patient and not hit like ur blindfolded. Dont lean over like ur a hunchback, if ur friend was some what of a decent fighter he would of got an uppercut. W/E man work on it.

awww man and how old are u guys? nvm, not every1 can be a natural, 1st thing..SLOWWWWW DOWN BUDDY, watch some boxing, every punch thrown should be perfect, of course that takes time and practice so GET TO IT! CANADA WHAAAAT maybe try throwin single punches and master them 1 by 1, start with ur straight punches, i dont think u threw a single one. each punch u throw should be the money shot..KO hit, even ur jab,thats how u should look @ it...then once u have the basics down u can start to learn more advanced combos and remember no matter how good u think u have gotten, and u will improve quickly, just know that if u stick with it, ur gunna look back and laugh...like @ this video here for example...i sorta wish i still had vids of me boxin when i was 14 no knowledge of anything just insane defense, a decent jab and a meeeeaaan left hand...we taped a couple but i dunno what happened to em..sucks. oh yea..CANADA WHAAAAT!

calm down in the ring... the first thing my trainer told me when i started was "he who angers you conquers you" work on proper form, and stay relaxed. staying relaxed will also help you absorb a punch to the head better. dont paw with your jab, and keep it up near your chin. fire it straight out, and bring it straight back. lastly move your head more. dont stay in one place, or you will be swallowing some teeth....